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Everything was perfect

Until the alarm clock went off


Oh.


(3 exposures)

Critiques


:iconrorymac666:
This is a striking yet fairly understated photo; well composed with a good concept.
Although it was probably your intention to use dull colours, I think that they could be perhaps a little more vivid, with the subject a bit closer to the camera.
However, the faded look still works well, and the triple exposure adds to an interesting, thought-provoking image which can be interpreted in many ways.
The emptiness of the frame accentuates the actions of the subject, and make his relatively simple feat of standing on a barrel seem more impressive. However, I think that this would work better if he moved closer to the camera for the third exposure.
Keep up the good work!
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:iconemmejay-fwz:
I absolutely adore dreamy themes.. the limitless wonders of two horizons between the sky and the ground- and in this, very well done natural lighting exposure and vast settings.
I notice the sky also resembles sprinkle of the fountain of youth, by the shape of these dotted mass of tiny cloud on the far right. The disappearing fog in the the spring-summer morning into the background far behind..
The man himself shows the three different characters imbued in him, rather than the three 'see no evil' types, they are the onlooker, the on-wanderer, and the on-thinker in my opinion.

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:iconpotatobeenz:
wow.
this really does look like a dream

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:iconagameanx:
I love it. The empty field 'till the horizon feels so great, awesome work.
:iconfogke:
the sky is like water

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:iconpaddyf123:
this is good, like really good
:)
:icon0kalcia0:
outstanding! sky looks like water. it does have dreamy feeling :)

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:iconp0rg:
Thank you very much man
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:iconpaddyf123:
no worries did u take it today? the sky was pretty dull over my way...

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Canon
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
1/60 second
F/14.0
10 mm
100
Jul 29, 2008, 3:54:35 PM

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