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Folded Dreams by P0RG Folded Dreams by P0RG
In dreams, emotions are overwhelming...


Inspired by :icondenisolivier:'s dreamscape series
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on the first look this image attracted me... but i was not sure what exactly... on the second look i think its the contrasts... the straight forms of the paper-ships vs. the round horizon and dust lines... big paper ships vs. small human... sharp and detailed sand vs. blurry, fuzzy & laminar cloud forms... the sharp/blurry contrast is also intensified by the (somehow strange) depth of field... all this creates a really surreal, dreamy atmosphere... the image is very harmonic but not boring as those contrasts bring enough tension in the image... it's calm and discreet but striking... it's really outstanding

the only thing which could be improved in my opinion is the format... a quadratic format is always a bit difficult... i think the composition would be more effective with more space at the top... then you have also a good contrast between the wide free space and the small filled area below... only a little thing but maybe with a big effect;)... and i have to substract a star for originality as the style is very akin to your source of inspiration

from the technical point of view the picture isn't too complex but well executed... and complexity isn't the most important thing for a convincing artwork... and that is "folded dreams" for sure:)
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diegomasarotti Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Me fascina PORG, tu arte es de ensueño, podria usarlo para adornar un tema instrumental? Wink/Razz 
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crh Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
stunning work!
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MarianneHviid Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Love this!
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TOMCAVANAUGH Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Professional Writer
Hey, I like this picture a lot and used a thumb nail of it in my latest journal entry. Thanks!!! It's a great picture!!!
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Marshmallow-Ferret Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
This piece seems so dramatic, but peaceful at the same time. I like the use of the paper boats, and the merging of the sea and the sky. The small, lone figure amongst the big paper boats really puts your idea across. I love it! :)
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alyssagremlin Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010
hello, i was wondering. if i could possibly put this in my photo scrollbox thing on my myspace. credit would go to you :) let me know.
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sory4lovin-you Featured By Owner May 31, 2010
wow this is great :) i love it
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MahmoudYakut Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured here [link] :salute:
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SSiS Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
Oh! Perfect! perfect! Perfect!!
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Karilynn2110 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
i'm jealous of you and your imagination.
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