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Jokulsarlon Scrap by =P0RG:iconP0RG:


©2009 =P0RG
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Stranger in Jökulsárlón
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The things that could make this a better photograph are so minor!! I adore the capture, it feels so real, totally in-the-moment. I enjoy that he isn't looking directly at the camera. It leaves one to wonder what sparked the moment and what he is looking at. As a portrait itself this is great, but knowing that there is a waterfall behind him and not being able to distinguish it is sort of disappointing; but at the same time leaves other viewers to be able to put him in their own setting. Also, i am slightly distracted by what is in his hand. Since i can only see a small fraction of it i'm constantly wondering wat it is...i'd say crop it, but it wouldn't look right. His right shoulder is amputated so that relieves some of the really nice semetry you could have. Despite the tiny fixes that could improve the picture, it is a great capture and very well done!
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love it :+favlove:
I didn't like the cut on the left

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hehe it looks a bit like my teacher =P
very nice - i love how the light catches the raindrops on his head
great work :thumbsup:

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I like how you always manage to get a plain background. And I also like how the hood and the raindrops are lit.
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10mm? were you up in the guy's face, or did you just crop the crap out of it? :P

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Love it, the monotone is gorgeous.

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like this :D

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wow i love it! love how its like "in the moment" type of photograph and it has a sense of curiosity to it!
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That's why I like your photography. Simple, but still oozes energy. Great! ;D

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
1/400 second
F/6.3
10 mm
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Jun 22, 2009, 5:53:35 PM

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