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Submitted: September 24, 2009
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Date Taken:Sep 22, 2009, 12:31:06 AM

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Photography / People & Portraits / Spontaneous Portraits

Spontaneous

Playing with flashes and high key monochrome.
Any suggestions?

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Critique by ~happy822 Sep 24, 2009, 10:19:45 AM

in addition to what was mentioned in the other critique, i would suggest either using all white [blanket] or have the shirt be the same value as the blanket. this will allow you to increase the contrast a bit more, as well as lighten the face, sky, and blanket. you are on the right track, however push the idea! another idea is to play around with different types of lighting in order to create the effect you are going for.

this image was composed very nicely, and i think it is a great one to work with high key lighting on.

What do you think?

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Critique by *HenrikHolmberg Sep 24, 2009, 8:45:03 AM

Hi. This is quite a nice concept, and I like the serenity and what I perceive as a lack of time in the image.

A couple of things though:

I find the lighting of the subject a bit too sharp for the background here, and the shirt gets a bit washed out.

Second there is a halo around the subject which after the first inpact is a bit distracting.

Otherwise I love the choise of crop and format. The tonality of the image is also pleasant to look at.

Well.. That is really all I had to say. Love your creativity and sense of colours ( in other works