I like both versions. Though the other one does seem crowded, I still like it.
I do love the empty space in this, gives it an odd feel, almost like just waking up having missed a call and the brain is still trying to wake up and come to grips with the world.
I do love the empty space in this, gives it an odd feel, almost like just waking up having missed a call and the brain is still trying to wake up and come to grips with the world.